100 Words: Pleasure

This week’s prompt: Pleasure

100 words, no more no less

He lays beside me smiling, the twinkle in his brown eyes captivate my heart. He reaches for my face and I gingerly kiss his fingers. His body is warm curled up next to me. I rub his nearly bald head. I return the smile and he giggles, kicks my belly. Grabbing his pudgy toes, I tickle his feet. His full laugh is contagious. He tries to roll away but finds himself face to face with a bearded man. The man opens his big hazel eyes, a familiar twinkle takes me breath. The man whispers, “Lil Man, she was mine first.”


  • Evenstarwen Reply

    What a beautiful picture of love! Contentment and happiness flows off the page. Wonderful!

  • barbara Reply

    lovely word picture – as a gramma to 7 and mama to 2 I am a total sucker for such. THANK you for sharing. :)

  • Tara R. Reply

    A sweet portrait of a young family.

  • Nicollette Reply

    What a lovely snapshot of pleasure! I absolutely love it and I love the tickling of “pudgy toes.” It reminds me of what my mother would do to me when I crawled into her bed during the early mornings!

  • Katie B.W. Reply

    At least I know I come by it honest. This is beautiful.

  • TaderDoodles Reply

    Thank you all for your sweet comments :) I’m a little smitten with my lil fat man right now (can you tell?)

    (and Katie: don’t make me tear up sis… I lurve ya)


  • AuroraLee Reply

    Another great twist. Very sweet. :) Nice work!

  • Velvet Verbosity Reply

    Both charming and heartwarming…nice piece as we slide into the holidays. :)

  • Jenn Reply

    Yes, I’m REALLY behind on my blog reading but just had to comment on this post-it made me smile (and maybe even tear up a little) :)

    Beautifully written my friend!

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